I was flattered that she remembered that I liked Heinrich Mann. Two hours later my joker was wrapped and I was balling her. To stay interested I had to pretend I was commanding her with that fat one of Manfred's I'd never seen.
On another topic, someone commented derogatorily on "Dad's" opinionatings but I found them usually indicative and often spot-on:
"He loved the flashlight more than he did the hearth," Dad said of guys he'd heard had left their wives.
And the short section on and ending page 107 summons and sums up the strength of this family's life:
"Now we must put our finer feelings to bed as the great task of sleep devolves upon us," Dad laughed on the stairs.
"Sleep for America," I heard Mom say.
In the book of my heart, pages keep falling out, many of them marked "Mom and Dad."
1 comment:
Thanks, Tim. Your examples are excellent.
As the party who "spoke derogatorily" about Pinckney's style, I will readily concede that I overstated the case; some of his "asides" do indeed work well. But I still believe he overindulges in such perorations, and the majority of them add nothing or even detract from the narrative.
Cheers, Steve
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